Analysis: Final

In 2009, Pixar Animation Studios released a montage entitled The Married Life, a brilliant five-minute masterclass in narrative exposition (Bradshaw, 2009) that centralises around the life of two lovers: Carl and Ellie. The montage is an excerpt from their multi-award-winning feature film, UP (Pete Docter, 2009). There are several editing techniques within the context of rhythm-making which have been applied onto The Married Life in order to craft an overall impactful and emotionally engaging cinematic experience, one of the techniques being “trajectory phrasing”.

Trajectory phrasing is an editing technique, theorised by film writer, director and editor, Dr. Karen Pearlman. In Pearlman’s words, she says that it is used to “shape the direction and energy of movement phrases in film editing” (Pearlman, 2016, p.19). Trajectory phrasing can be achieved through a careful composition of mise-en-scene, and a combination of several editing tools such as cutting and transitioning, resulting in a rhythmically harmonious flow of energy.

To visualise this theory is an excerpt from Goddard’s conversation with Agns Guillemot from the article, Montage My Fine Care (Cahiers du Cinéma, 1956), to which he says, “.. You notice a young girl in the street who attracts you. You hesitate to follow her. A quarter of a second. How to convey this hesitation? Mise-en-scene will answer the question, ‘how shall I approach her?’. But in order to render explicit the other question, ‘am I going to love her?’ you are forced to bestow importance on the quarter of a second during which the two questions are born.”


Figure 1: Young Ellie and Carl in The Married Life montage.

As shown in Figure 1, the audience is introduced to a young and cheerful Ellie who expresses her fondness towards a young, introverted Carl. In the next shot, Carl walks to his bedroom window and leans on his blue balloon as he looks out the window, trailing Ellie off.

The revelation shot of Carl’s “look”, with reference to Goddard’s example stated in the introductory section of this analysis, is an important component of the scene which behaves as a nexus to the trajectories that follow, throughout The Married Life’s entire plot. The scene’s lighting composition and Carl’s actions and reaction play important roles to effectively communicate the “quarter of a second ‘look’” that is exemplified by Goddard.

In order to set a suitable mood for this determining moment in The Married Life, the mise-en-scene is lit by two sources of light: a diminished warm fill light in the background, and the moonlight that acts as a key light. The construction of these two soft quality lighting together creates a dreamy atmosphere which radiates a warm and cosy energy, therefore, setting up the audience’s expectations of a positive reaction from Carl. Applying Landau’s (2014 , p. 16) theory in which he says, “.. We can direct the focus of the viewer’s attention to what we want the viewer to concentrate more on within the picture. The human eye is attracted to whatever the brightest thing is in its view”, the moonlight therefore subconsciously shifts the audience’s focus onto the brightest lit subject which is Carl’s face, and the audience forms a perception of Carl’s reaction.

Therefore, the factors mentioned above: lighting composition and character’s actions, which contribute to the materialisation of Carl’s “look”, function as tools to form a flow of trajectory within a mise-en-scene with the sole purpose of communicating the idea of The Married Life’s premise.

Figure 2: Colliding trajectories between two shots.

Figure 2 shows the pivotal, climactic part of the montage. The first shot on the left is a shot with a mise-en-scene that is designed to draw the audience in with the prominent feature which is the mural of a stork delivering a baby, a culturally famous symbol of a pregnancy made popular by Hans Christian Andersen’s “The Storks” (2001). Combined with a primary use of the colour yellow, which according to Goethe (1810 , p. 307), is a colour that conveys excitement; this mise-en-scene, further enhanced by the natural daylight coming from the window, is crafted with the intention of conveying the excitement that Carl and Ellie feel, as parents-to-be.

However, the high energy radiated in the first shot dramatically drops into a low energy as the camera pans into a shot of Carl and Ellie on the right, both situated in front of their gynaecologist in a dimly lit clinic room. This low-key lighting technique, commonly used to light negative scenes, effectively breaks the audience’s initial idea of Carl and Ellie’s venture into parenthood. It offers the audience a new perspective towards the storyline and simultaneously increases their curiosity, allowing them to reason with their predictions of the couple’s future.

The seamless flow between these two contrasting energies are what Pearlman (2016 , p. 55) refers to as a “colliding trajectory”. Regardless of whether the two shots are linked together with a smooth transition like the dolly pan used in this scene, the colliding energies between the two shots create a shock factor that moves the audience’s emotions, rendering the scene a climactic and unforgettable one.

Figure 3: Two scenes which exemplify trajectory phrasing to convey the passing of time.

The first scene, shown as a series of shots that are vertically aligned on the left hand side of Figure 3, begins with an establishing shot of the characters’ primary goal of pursuing Paradise Falls. It is followed by a rhythmic series of fast cuts, highlighting Carl and Ellie’s life hurdles. The second scene on the right comprises a series of fast-cut, close up shots from Ellie’s point of view as she tightens Carl’s tie on a daily basis. The tie design changes with every shot, emulating her daily routine of tightening Carl’s tie. There is also a gradual change in Carl’s overall look throughout the entire scene to show Carl’s ageing process.

The two scenes are comprehensively cut and arranged in chronological order to maintain a cohesive trajectory that simulates a considerable time gap between each event (each shot). The implementation of elliptical editing, a transitioning technique used to decrease a duration of a plot (Bordwell, 1985) in the two scenes, shortens the duration of events to fit the limited amount of time that makes a montage what it is, and to create an illusion of time passing by, without compromising the audience’s interests towards the plot and character development.

Murch’s lecture (2001 , p. 16) in which he mentions, “If you are in an actual fight, you will be blinking dozens of times in a minute because you are thinking dozens of conflicting thoughts a minute— and so when you are watching a fight in a film, there should be dozens of cuts per minute. This would make the audience participate emotionally in the fight itself”, can be associated with the two scenes shown in Figure 3, wherethe editor arranges approximately 10 cuts per 10 seconds, activating what Restak (2008) refers to as the “mirror neurons” in the audience’s brains, giving rise to a sense of relatability with the characters’ feelings and experiences. These engaging events in the form of fast cuts that are chronologically edited to produce a unified flow of trajectory therefore prompts the audience to form a strong emotional bond towards Carl and Ellie.

In conclusion, with the application of “trajectory phrasing” as an editing technique that is delivered through a combination of well-composed mise-en-scenes, cutting, and transitioning techniques, a heavily emotional film is able to move its audience by-way-of a rhythmic consistency in the form of trajectories that is evident from the beginning of the film to its end, like that of The Married Life montage.

Goddard’s (1956 , p . 2) quote concludes the application of trajectory phrasing in The Married Life with the intention of creating an emotionally unforgettable cinematic experience, to which he says, “cutting on a look is, in effect, to bring out the soul under the spirit, the passion behind the intrigue, to make the heart prevail over the intelligence by destroying the notion of space in favour of that of time”.

Word Count: 1337 Words

Bibliography

Bradshaw, P. (2009) ‘Up’, The Guardian, 9 October. Available at: https://www.theguardian.com/film/2009/oct/09/up-review (Accessed: 1 December 2021).

Pearlman, K. (2016) Cutting Rhythms. New York: Routledge. Second Edition.

Godard, J.-L (1956). Montage My Fine Care. Paris: In Cahiers du Cinéma (1996).

Landau, D. (2014) Lighting for Cinematography: A Practical Guide to the Art and Craft of Lighting for the Moving Image. London: Bloomsbury Publishing Plc.

Sax, Boria (2001) The Mythical Zoo. Oxford, UK: ABC-CLIO. pp. 153–4. ISBN 978-1-57607-612-5.

Goethe W. (1810) Theory of Colors. London: Frank Cass.

Bordwell, D. (1985) Narration in the Fiction Film. Madison: University of Wisconsin Press.

Murch, W. (2001) In A Blink Of An Eye. California: Silman-James Press. Second Edition.

Restak, R. (2006) The Naked Brain: How the Emerging Neurosociety is Changing How We Live, Work, and Love. New York: Harmony Books.

Bibliography Update

Bradshaw, P. (2009) ‘Up’, The Guardian, 9 October. Available at: https://www.theguardian.com/film/2009/oct/09/up-review (Accessed: 1 December 2021).

Pearlman, K. (2016) Cutting Rhythms. New York: Routledge. Second Edition.

Godard, J.-L (1956). Montage My Fine Care. Paris: In Cahiers du Cinéma (1996).

Landau, D. (2014) Lighting for Cinematography: A Practical Guide to the Art and Craft of Lighting for the Moving Image. London: Bloomsbury Publishing Plc.

Sax, Boria (2001) The Mythical Zoo. Oxford, UK: ABC-CLIO. pp. 153–4. ISBN 978-1-57607-612-5.

Goethe W. (1810) Theory of Colors. London: Frank Cass.

Bordwell, D. (1985) Narration in the Fiction Film. Madison: University of Wisconsin Press.

Murch, W. (2001) In A Blink Of An Eye. California: Silman-James Press. Second Edition.

Restak, R. (2006) The Naked Brain: How the Emerging Neurosociety is Changing How We Live, Work, and Love. New York: Harmony Books.

Analysis: Working Third Draft

Introduction

In 2009, Pixar Animation Studios produced a montage called The Married Life, a brilliant five-minute masterclass in narrative exposition (Bradshaw, 2009) from their multi-award-winning feature film, UP (Pete Docter, 2009). The Married Life uses the application of “trajectory phrasing” (Pearlman, 2016) in its rhythmic construction.

Trajectory phrasing is a technique that is theorised by film writer, director and editor, Dr. Karen Pearlman. It is used to shape the direction and energy of movement phrases in film editing (Pearlman, 2016). Trajectory phrasing can be achieved through careful composition of a mise-en-scene, cutting, and transitioning, which results in a harmonious and rhythmic flow of energy and an overall cinematic experience.

To visualise this theory is an excerpt from Goddard’s conversation with Agns Guillemot from the article, Montage My Fine Care (Cahiers du Cinéma, 1956), in which he says, “.. You notice a young girl in the street who attracts you. You hesitate to follow her. A quarter of a second. How to convey this hesitation? Mise-en-scene will answer the question, ‘how shall I approach her?’. But in order to render explicit the other question, ‘am I going to love her?’ you are forced to bestow importance on the quarter of a second during which the two questions are born.”

Trajectories within a mise-en-scene

Figure 1: Young Ellie and Carl in The Married Life

In Figure 1, the audience is introduced to a young and cheerful Ellie who expresses her fondness towards a young, introverted Karl. In the next shot, Karl walks to his bedroom window and leans on his blue balloon as he looks out the window, trailing Ellie off.

In Carl’s shot, the lighting composition and character’s actions and reactions are the main contributing factors forming the presentation of an effective mise-en-scene. It is the shot that highlights Carl’s ‘look’, with reference to Goddard’s example mentioned above, and it behaves as a nexus to the chains of trajectories that follow, which sets the audience’s expectations of The Married Life’s overall theme.

To create a suitable mood for Carl’s “look”, he is lit by two sources of light: a diminished warm fill light in the background, and a moonlight that serves as a key-light. The soft quality of both lighting sources creates a dream-like atmosphere which represents Carl’s state of mind. The moonlight being the key-light, shifts the audience’s attention onto Karl’s face and forms anticipation towards his actions. This shift of attention is caused by a natural tendency of the human eyes to be attracted to the brightest point on a screen (Landau, 2014). Following a suitable lighting environment is Carl’s actions which begins with a surprised look for the audience to anticipate his reaction, and ends with a look of admiration that sets up the premise of The Married Life.

Trajectories between two shots

Figure 2: Colliding trajectories between two shots.

Figure 2 shows the pivotal, climactic part of the montage. The first shot on the left is a shot with a mise-en-scene that is designed to draw the audience in with the prominent feature that is the mural of a stork delivering a baby, a culturally famous symbol of a pregnancy made popular by Hans Chrisitan Andersen’s “The Storks” (2001). Combined with a primary use of the colour yellow, which according to Goethe (1810 , p. 307), is a colour that conveys excitement; this mise-en-scene that is further enhanced by the natural daylight coming from the window is crafted with the intention of conveying the emotional excitement that Carl and Ellie are experiencing as parents to be.

However, the high energy radiated in the first shot dramatically drops into a low energy as the camera pans into a shot of Carl and Ellie on the right, who are situated in front of their gynaecologist, in a dimly lit clinic room. This low-key lighting technique, commonly used to light negative scenes, effectively breaks the audience’s initial idea of Carl and Ellie’s venture into parenthood. It offers the audience a new perspective towards the narrative direction and simultaneously increases their curiosity, causing them to make their own reasoning and predictions of what is to come.

The seamless flow between these two contrasting energies are what Pearlman (2016 , p. 55) refers to as a “colliding trajectory”. Regardless of whether two shots are linked together with a transition as smooth as the dolly pan used in this scene, the colliding energies between the two shots are what creates a shock factor that moves the audience’s emotions to create an impactful and unforgettable scene.

Trajectory phrasing as a tool to convey time.


Figure 3: Two scenes that use the same editing style: fast cutting.

Figure 3 shows two scenes that are examples of the application of fast-cutting used to create trajectories  that convey the passing of time in The Married Life.

The first scene begins with an establishing shot of the character’s primary goal of pursuing Paradise Falls, which is followed by a rhythmic series of fast cuts that highlight Carl and Ellie’s life hurdles. The second scene comprises a series of close up shots from Ellie’s point of view (POV) as she tightens Carl’s tie on a daily basis. The tie design changes with every shot, emulating her daily routine of tightening Carl’s tie. There is also a gradual change in Carl’s overall look throughout the entire scene to show Carl’s process of ageing.

These two scenes, each respectively showcasing a series of fast cuts, are comprehensively cut and arranged in chronological order to maintain a cohesive trajectory that conveys the passing of time. The implementation of elliptical editing, a transitioning technique used to decrease a duration of a plot (Bordwell, 1985) in these two scenes, aids with cutting out a considerable amount of time to allow for a concise plot delivery for The Married Life montage without having to compromise the audience’s interest towards the plot development.

Relating to Murch’s lecture (2001 , p. 16) in which he had mentioned, “If you are in an actual fight, you will be blinking dozens of times in a minute because you are thinking dozens of conflicting thoughts a minute— and so when you are watching a fight in a film, there should be dozens of cuts per minute. This would make the audience participate emotionally in the fight itself”, similarly in the two scenes mentioned above, the editor arranges approximately 10 cuts per 10 seconds, activating what Restak (2008) refers to as the “mirror neurons” in the audience’s brains which allow them to feel personally and emotionally involved in Carl and Ellie’s within a short period of time.

Conclusion

In short, when a scene and narrative is delivered through a combination of a well-composed mise-en-scene, cuts, holds and transitions, it is able to create a consistent flow of trajectories that contributes to an indelible cinematic experience.

Goddard (1956 , p . 2)’s ingenious quote can be used to conclude the application of trajectory phrasing in The Married Life, to which he says, “cutting on a look is, in effect, to bring out the soul under the spirit, the passion behind the intrigue, to make the heart prevail over the intelligence by destroying the notion of space in favour of that of time”.

Word count: 1195 words

Bibliography

Bradshaw, P. (2009) ‘Up’, The Guardian, 9 October. Available at: https://www.theguardian.com/film/2009/oct/09/up-review (Accessed: 1 December 2021).

Pearlman, K. (2016) Cutting Rhythms. New York: Routledge. Second Edition.

Landau, D., 2014. Lighting for Cinematography: A Practical Guide to the Art and Craft of Lighting for the Moving Image. London: Bloomsbury Publishing Plc.

Sax, Boria (2001). The Mythical Zoo. Oxford, UK: ABC-CLIO. pp. 153–4. ISBN 978-1-57607-612-5.

Goethe W. (1810). Theory of Colors. London: Frank Cass.

Bordwell, D. (1985). Narration in the Fiction Film. Madison: University of Wisconsin Press.

Murch, W. (2001) In A Blink Of An Eye. California: Silman-James Press. Second Edition.

Restak, R. (2006). The Naked Brain: How the Emerging Neurosociety is Changing How We Live, Work, and Love. New York: Harmony Books.

Godard, J.-L (1956). Montage My Fine Care. Paris: In Cahiers du Cinéma (1996).

Analysis: Working second draft

Introduction

With a rich history of producing countless of award-winning animated feature films, it is no longer a surprise how Pixar Animation Studios is able to produce a magical montage like The Married Life, a brilliant five-minute masterclass in narrative exposition (Bradshaw, 2009) from their multi-award-winning feature film, UP (Pete Docter, 2009). The Married Life uses the application of “trajectory phrasing” (Pearlman, 2016) in it’s rhythmic construction which portrays the intentions and emotions that exist within the narrative of the montage.

Trajectory phrasing is a part of rhythm-shaping in the art of editing – a technique to simultaneously convey and retain the consistency of a heavily emotional story. With a carefully composed mise-en-scene, a seamless transition between shots no matter the nature of two shots, cutting that holds a particular information per shot and experience in knowing how long to hold a shot – it is this combination that allows the audience to comprehend the direction of the story and feel the character’s lingering sense of emptiness for a long period of time.

Trajectories within actions

Figure 1: A choreography of actions and reactions, a subtle way to set audience expectations.

In Figure 1, we are introduced to a young and cheerful Ellie, who casually expresses her fondness towards a young, introverted Karl. In the next shot, the audience sees Karl walking from the shadows of his room out to his moonlit bedroom window. He leans on his blue balloon and looks out the window with his eyes heavy-lidded, presumably trailing Ellie off.

The combination of Ellie’s dialogue, “you know, you don’t talk very much. I like you,” and her quick movements that accompany her jovial personality altogether behaves as an impetus to the entire scene. Afterwards, in response, Karl carries out a sequence of actions: he walks towards the window with a look of wonderment on his face, followed by a look of admiration as he leans on his blue balloon. Karl’s three-second act of response is a nexus to the chains of trajectories that follow throughout the whole montage, a link which sets the audience’s expectations of The Married Life’s overall theme that are the ideas of Karl’s future intentions. When Ellie’s intentions are clear, Karl’s intentions in response becomes equally fathomable, the audience comprehends the narrative dynamics owing to the flow of trajectories, which renders the entire scene emotionally gripping.

To support this statement is an excerpt from Goddard’s conversation with Agns Guillemot from the article, Montage My Fine Care (Cahiers du Cinéma, 1956), to which he says, “.. You notice a young girl in the street who attracts you. You hesitate to follow her. A quarter of a second. How to convey this hesitation? Mise-en-scene will answer the question, ‘how shall I approach her?’. But in order to render explicit the other question, ‘am I going to love her?’ you are forced to bestow importance on the quarter of a second during which the two questions are born.”

Trajectories between two shots

Figure 2: Mise-en-scene as a composition tool to create colliding trajectories.

In Figure 2, the first image on the left serves as a climactic turning point of the film. The mise-en-scene is designed to draw the audience in with the prominent feature that is the mural of a stork delivering a baby, a culturally famous symbol of a pregnancy made popular by Hans Chrisitan Andersen’s “The Storks” (2001). Combined with a primary use of the colour yellow, which according to Goethe (1810 , p. 307), is a colour that conveys excitement; this mise-en-scene that is further enhanced by the natural daylight coming from the window was crafted with the intention of conveying the emotional excitement that Karl and Ellie are experiencing as they eagerly open their arms to the new world of parenthood.

However, this uplifting energy presented in the first shot is then redirected by a camera pan into a dark environment, resonating a much lower energy as we are presented with the couple, situated in a dimly lit clinic room. The audience is presented with a contrastingly tragic scene of Ellie’s failed pregnancy as she sits on a chair, crying.

The seamless flow between these two contrasting energies – one highly spirited and another, low; are what Pearlman (2016 , p. 55) refers to as a “colliding trajectory”, where, regardless of whether two shots are linked together with a transition as smooth as the dolly pan, the colliding energies between the two shots are what creates a shock factor that moves the audience’s emotions to create an impactful scene.

Trajectories presented by multiple quick-cuts

Figure 3: Multiple cuts within seconds, a cutting technique to give an illusion of the passing of time.

In Figure 3, Karl and Ellie have picked themselves back up after their devastating phase in life, deciding to take life as it is and work their way towards their dream of moving to Paradise Falls. This fourty-second sequence is chained together as a series of quick shots, effectively cut with ellipsis in-betweens to achieve an illusion of time that is quickly passing by. To achieve a balance of cutting and piecing the ‘right’ amount of information within each cut in order to achieve a consistent flow of trajectories requires much experience on the editor’s part.

As Murch (2001 , p. 16) had mentioned in his lecture, “If you are in an actual fight, you will be blinking dozens of times in a minute because you are thinking dozens of conflicting thoughts a minute— and so when you are watching a fight in a film, there should be dozens of cuts per minute. This would make the audience participate emotionally in the fight itself”. Similarly in The Married Life, the editor arranges approximately 10 cuts per 10 seconds, activating what Restak (2008) refers to as the “mirror neurons” in the audience’s brains that allow them to feel personally and emotionally involved in Karl and Ellie’s lives as they process these series of thoughts in short period of time.

Conclusion

In conclusion, when a scene is made of the right combination of cuts, holds, and transitions, it is able to create a consistent flow of trajectory that retains the audience’s attention and for them to develop a strong sense of emotional attachment towards the two characters.

Goddard (1956 , p . 2)’s ingenious quote can be used to conclude the application of trajectory phrasing in The Married Life, to which he says, “cutting on a look is, in effect, to bring out the soul under the spirit, the passion behind the intrigue, to make the heart prevail over the intelligence by destroying the notion of space in favour of that of time”.

Word count: 1103 words

Bibliography

Bradshaw, P. (2009) ‘Up’, The Guardian, 9 October. Available at: https://www.theguardian.com/film/2009/oct/09/up-review (Accessed: 1 December 2021).

Pearlman, K. (2016) Cutting Rhythms. New York: Routledge. Second Edition.

Sax, Boria (2001). The Mythical Zoo. Oxford, UK: ABC-CLIO. pp. 153–4. ISBN 978-1-57607-612-5.

Goethe W. (1810). Theory of Colors. London: Frank Cass.

Murch, W. (2001) In A Blink Of An Eye. California: Silman-James Press. Second Edition.

Restak, R. (2006). The Naked Brain: How the Emerging Neurosociety is Changing How We Live, Work, and Love. New York: Harmony Books.

Godard, J.-L (1956). Montage My Fine Care. Paris: In Cahiers du Cinéma (1996).

Analysis: First Draft

Introduction

With a rich history of producing countless of impressive animated feature films, it is no longer a surprise how the credible animation studio, Pixar, is able to cook up a magical montage like The Married Life, a brilliant five-minute masterclass in narrative exposition (Bradshaw, 2009) from their multi-award-winning feature film, UP (Pete Docter, 2009). In this essay, I will show examples for my working premise of how Pixar uses “trajectory phrasing” (Pearlman, 2016) to enhance the portrayal of intentions and emotions within the narrative of The Married Life.

Trajectory phrasing is an crucial part of rhythm-making to simultaneously convey and retain the consistency of a heavily emotional story. With a carefully composed mise-en-scene, a seamless transition between shots no matter the nature of two shots, cutting the right amount of information per shot and instinctively knowing how long to hold the shot- a combination that allows the audience to ride along in the direction of the entire story, that is the nature of trajectory phrasing. A profound technique that when skillfully applied, leaves the audience feeling the character’s lingering sense of emptiness like that of Karl, even years after watching a film.

Trajectories between two shots

Figure 2

In Figure 2, the first image on the left serves as a crucial turning point of the film. The mise-en-scene is designed to draw the audience in with the prominent feature that is the mural of a stork delivering a baby, a culturally famous symbol of a pregnancy made popular by Hans Chrisitan Andersen’s “The Storks” (2001). Combined with a primary use of the colour yellow, which according to Goethe (1810), is a colour that conveys excitement; this mise-en-scene that is further enhanced by the natural daylight coming from the window was crafted with the intention of conveying the emotional excitement that Karl and Ellie are experiencing as they eagerly open their arms to the new world of parenthood. However, this uplifting energy presented in the first shot is then redirected by a camera pan into a dark environment, resonating a much lower energy as we are presented with the couple, situated in a dimly lit clinic room. The audience is presented with a contrastingly tragic scene of Ellie’s failed pregnancy as she sits on a chair, crying. The seamless flow between these two contrasting energies – one highly spirited and another, low; are what Pearlman (2016) refers to as a “colliding trajectory”, where, regardless of whether two shots are linked together with a transition as smooth as the dolly pan, the colliding energies between the two shots are what creates a shock factor that is essential to move the audience’s emotions to create a scene as impactful as this.

Trajectories presented by multiple quick-cuts


Figure 3

In Figure 3, Karl and Ellie have picked themselves back up after their devastating phase in life, deciding to take life as it is and work their way towards their dream of moving to Paradise Falls. This fourty-second sequence is jam-packed with quick shots, effectively cut with ellipsis in-betweens to achieve an illusion of time that is quickly passing by. However, it takes a skillful editor to achieve a balance of cutting and piecing the ‘right’ amount of information within each cut in order to achieve a consistent flow of trajectories, enough to retain the audience’s attention. As Murch (2001) had mentioned in his lecture, “If you are in an actual fight, you will be blinking dozens of times in a minute because you are thinking dozens of conflicting thoughts a minute— and so when you are watching a fight in a film, there should be dozens of cuts per minute. This would make the audience participate emotionally in the fight itself”. Similarly in The Married Life, the editor arranges approximately 10 cuts per 10 seconds, activating what Restak (2008) refers to as the “mirror neurons” in the audience’s brains that allow them to feel personally and emotionally involved in Karl and Ellie’s lives as they process these series of thoughts in short period of time. Therefore, when a scene is made of the right combination of cuts, holds, and transitions, it is powerful enough to create a consistent flow of trajectory that retains the audience’s attention and for them to develop a strong sense of emotional attachment towards the two characters.

Conclusion

To conclude my analysis, I would like to quote the wonderful Goddard (1956) as he says, “cutting on a look is, in effect, to bring out the soul under the spirit, the passion behind the intrigue, to make the heart prevail over the intelligence by destroying the notion of space in favour of that of time”.

Word count: 807 words

Bibliography

Bradshaw, P. (2009) ‘Up’, The Guardian, 9 October. Available at: https://www.theguardian.com/film/2009/oct/09/up-review (Accessed: 1 December 2021).

Pearlman, K. (2016) Cutting Rhythms. New York: Routledge. Second Edition.

Ainsworth, M. D. (1969) ‘Object relations, dependency, and attachment: A theoretical review of the intant-mother relationship’, Child Development, 40, 969-1025, 2.

Sax, Boria (2001). The Mythical Zoo. Oxford, UK: ABC-CLIO. pp. 153–4. ISBN 978-1-57607-612-5.

Goethe W. (1810). Theory of Colors. London: Frank Cass.

Murch, W. (2001) In A Blink Of An Eye. California: Silman-James Press. Second Edition.

Restak, R. (2006). The Naked Brain: How the Emerging Neurosociety is Changing How We Live, Work, and Love. New York: Harmony Books.

Goddard: Will need help from Chris with citing this article extract

Click the link below for the .pdf version of this draft:

Focus: Event Rhythms

Chosen book for bibliography:
Cutting Rhythms by Karen Pearlman (2009)

This is an absolutely mind-blowing book by the way. If not for Chris’ suggestion to read this book, I wouldn’t have made so many discoveries with regards to the topic of rhythms and movements. I’ve gained an utmost level of respect towards Karen Pearlman for unfolding these findings throughout her research as it is the topic that I have always been very much interested in: the coherence of flow & rhythm in films.

Below are some quotes I’ve derived from her book, and these are my findings around Chapter 5: Physical, Emotional and Event Rhythms.

Cutting the movement energy of events, information, colors, textures, ideas, emotions, and so on is a process of shaping the flow of energy found in the various
shots into the single flow of movement and energy over time known
as “ rhythm ”

The physical rhythm sets up a kinesthetic empathy. The emotional rhythm relies on the physical, which is reframed as emotionally laden, to have its impact. And the event
rhythm relies on both the movement of image and sound and the
movement of emotion to communicate or convey its information.

Emotion moves back and forth, like a tennis ball in play. But
it is the editor who shapes the rhythm of the game. She shapes it by
choosing the shots for the energy they contain, juxtaposing the shots to
make a dynamic and credible emotional arc
and trimming the shots to
the frames on which the energy is optimally thrown and caught.

A scene may appear to be about a car crash, for example, but really be about
rebuilding trust between two characters. If the event is cut only for the
text and not for the subtext, then events later on, where the trust is at
stake, will lose their links in the cause-and-effect chain.

.. The editor continually has to put herself in the audience’s position, refreshing her own kinesthetic empathy and antipathy to feel with the rise and fall of the event’s cycles of tension and release.

Therefore from my readings: an editor/animator would always need to be equipped with strong intuition: a strong sense of kinesthetic empathy (which is acquired by ample of experience and practice to enhance their kinesthetic empathy abilities) in order to produce a rhythmically eventful & seamless sequence of rhythmic event to produce emotionally impactful & coherently coordinated film, to put themselves in the audience’s shoes.

Phase 1: UP

UP: The Married Life (2009)
Director: Pete Docter/Bob Peterson
Writers: Pete Docter/Bob Peterson/Tom McCarthy
Production Companies: Pixar Animation/Walt Disney Pictures

Brief Introduction of the scene from UP: Married Life

The Married Life scene from the famous movie by Disney & Pixar, UP (2009), brings viewers into a life journey between two childhood lovers, Carl and Ellie. The scene begins with the innocent Young Ellie who outwardly expresses her liking towards Young Carl because of his quietness, which took Young Carl by surprise as he walks towards his bedroom window, out from the dark and into the moonlight.

From this short introduction onwards, the audience is then brought into Carl & Ellie’s rollercoaster of life, full of ups and downs: from their first day as wedded partners, all the way until the end of their final moments of Ellie’s last breath.

I think that The Married Life scene has cleverly captured the essence of true love and devotion by perfectly blending a solid storyline & narrative, character arc, colour palette, semiotic representations embedded within the characters’ personal belongings and music accompaniment altogether.

An Effective Story Arc
It’s interesting that within 5 minutes, this short scene from UP successfully cramped up a whole life’s journey by effectively using trackings and cuts, arranged in a mixture of linears and non-linears within an overall linear timeline. The Married Life uses a typical narrative arc containing an exposition (introduction of their childhood meet), rising action (their wedding and how they breathed life into what was once an old, crooked house together), a climax (when the two had beautiful plans to have children but are later on met with the news that they would not be able to), and a resolution (moving on to eventually lead a flourishing life, just the two of them together).

What Piqued My Interest
I’m honestly interested to understand how Pixar managed to cook up an emotional and impactful story that leaves their audience feeling extremely attached to the characters. I watched this movie back in 2009 at the cinema and it had powerfully left such an impact on me that even now, a decade later, I would still feel that heart-wrenching pain every time this scene is brought up in a conversation. So what did Pixar do right? What was the message of this film sequence?

Pixar managed to embed a sense of emotional attachment towards these characters by designing a pattern of ideally meaningful moments at settings that are repeatedly shown throughout the short film. By doing so, the audience are introduced to a framework of familiarity and relatability that passes with us through time.

The brilliant colour-scripting in this sequence portrays livelihood and celebratory occasions by using a bright, whimsical contrast of hues (eg: the couple’s wedding, the completion of their house, their new job together at the zoo and the nursery-preparation scene) and alternatively dark, less saturated colours for the hardships in life (eg: the gynecologists’ clinic scene, the tree-falling scene, Ellie’s funeral and Carl’s return to their home, alone).

Ellie and Carl’s outfits also play an important role in representing the phases of their relationship and their own individual character development. We can see Ellie and Carl starting off as a new couple with complementing outfits and holding hands, showcasing the new, strong bond and attachment towards each other which eventually progresses to a comfortable phase in their relationship where they feel content just laying side by side.

It’s also interesting to see the implementation of colours and patterns in each of the character’s outfits. On Ellie, there is a strong use of bright, striking colours with patterns that change according to what her personality- a cheerful, eager and positive person. She is presented as a go-getter, the type of person who works her way towards her goals, no matter what it takes. However, since she does often seem to have a need to visualize her expressions, Ellie is later on seen wearing a dress with fallen leaves as its pattern to signify and represent the one heartbreak that she has a tough time holding onto – the fact that she is no longer able to conceive; the one goal she was extremely excited about that is confirmed, unachievable.

On the other hand, we see Carl in a constant, uniform set of style in limited colours. It shows his personality as someone who has visions and goals but is also naturally calm, minimal, quiet and collected. The juxtaposition of these two, contrasting characters, seem to create the perfect balance in their relationship.

During the beginning and closer to the end of the sequence, we see two similar longshots that to me, have been beautifully arranged and crafted to depict the story of life and time. Positioning the first scene of Carl walking up to Ellie in a green, luscious hill with what seems to be buildings of that time, during sunrise, represents the early stages of their lives as a couple together whereas the next scene is a juxstaposition of old lives in new times where the audience sees an old, frail and sick Ellie walking up to Carl, who in opposite, is very eager to show Ellie their ticket to Paradise Falls which is a long-term goal of theirs, with the background showing a developed city of tall buildings and skyscrapers, during sunset to signify the golden hours of their now golden days.

The sequential use of ellipsis in this part of the film where Ellie and Carl have decided to move on with their lives, is an intelligent way to convey the passing of time. My absolute favourite scene would have to be the punctured tyres scene. It is to me, a metaphor of their life together as a couple who are going on life’s adventures wherever the wheel takes them- and when punctured, they break their Paradise Falls savings to signify a fresh new start over and over again; precisely what life actually is, an endless cycle of ease and hardship.

To me, The Married Life is an absolutely charming short film that brilliantly speaks about the passing of time, put together by a coherent narrative and use of camera angles, trackings, use of colours and an accompaniment of instrumental music that speaks volume about the feeling of love and acceptance present between Ellie and Carl – till death do them part.

Phase 1: Decision-Making

Hello! So this post talks about how I eventually decided on the scene that I found most intriguing and interesting to critically analyse.

After spending hours of watching every video in the list Chris had prepared, I had to filter out the ones that didn’t quite capture my attention. I was left with just 2 films: Up and Gerald McBoing-Boing.

In the next postings, I’ll basically note down some important reasonings as to why these 2 scenes have captured my attention & piqued my interest, both visually and contextually. Till next time!